Tuesday, June 30, 2009

The Moment

I want this to be amazing.
What is this?
My life needs to be blazing.
Will I burn?
This night mixes, failing.
Why is it here?
Winning is not telling.
How is this so?
This breaking is living
Who is there?
I'm growing by giving
Where are you?

1 comment:

caserad said...

I really like how this is interspersed with questions. Between that and the statements, you cover a lot. It says a lot ["My life needs to be blazing. Will I burn?"] especially right there. I like how the questions always refer back to the statement.
Nicely written Booder :)