Saturday, August 29, 2009

It's Meant

This habit is breaking apart my soul
Tasting heat, fighting pain, holding cold
Create a way to strike a nerve
Turning a beat, seeing disdain, writing a word
Save yourself from this investment regret
Saying defeat, losing my reign, lovingly met
Look to the signs and realize failure
Being replete, knowing shame, boldly tell her

1 comment:

Caserad said...

I really like how this is written, Sam. It goes between groups of actions and command lines. I get more meaning through the way it's written than what you've actually said, and i don't see this very often. it's truly and incredible work.